Would you want to read this? ?

It sounds really good. The writting is very descriptive so i can't even imagne what that actual content would be like. It's pretty much the appitimie of what i would read. I think that it would be really good if the relationship between Asher and his parent were more defined but i do understand that this is just a summary. If you ever need anyone to read it you can email me at santiagomariah@rocketmail.com. I think that it has lots of promise and if your not to stuck on the names that changing anna or asher because they are really similar. I personaly like it but the name could get confusing.